"X" is a supernatural being, obviously, but since she doesn't plan on reappearing for quite a while I'll tell you a bit about her.
1. She shapeshifts.
2. She's powerful, but not all-powerful.
3. She does things because I tell her to, and that's all the reader needs to know about her motives.
4. She's a red-head-- in humanoid form, at least. (As if you couldn't tell.)
[/and now it's 2016]
The major comments I have about this page right now:
1. I am still pleased with the effect of the first few panels even though I literally did them in MS Paint
2. The lack of backgrounds on other pages really hurts the effect of this page, like holy crap. I don't think the proper effect of the White Nothing this setting is supposed to be really came across until like. MAYBE sometime in 2008? Maybe.
1. She shapeshifts.
2. She's powerful, but not all-powerful.
3. She does things because I tell her to, and that's all the reader needs to know about her motives.
4. She's a red-head-- in humanoid form, at least. (As if you couldn't tell.)
[/and now it's 2016]
The major comments I have about this page right now:
1. I am still pleased with the effect of the first few panels even though I literally did them in MS Paint
2. The lack of backgrounds on other pages really hurts the effect of this page, like holy crap. I don't think the proper effect of the White Nothing this setting is supposed to be really came across until like. MAYBE sometime in 2008? Maybe.